Hey Rangimarie it's your friend Te Aroha. Your pick a path story is cool. Maybe you could've added more colour into your story i like your options and how it was based on Trolls. I think you should've added some information or a reflection Nice work though
Hi Rangimarie,paris,haelyn It's Miria I like how you put so much information it is so interesting and why did you's do something about matariki and you put trolls in.
Hey Rangimarie it's your friend Te Aroha. Your pick a path story is cool. Maybe you could've added more colour into your story i like your options and how it was based on Trolls. I think you should've added some information or a reflection Nice work though
ReplyDeleteHi Rangimarie,paris,haelyn It's Miria I like how you put so much information it is so interesting and why did you's do something about matariki and you put trolls in.
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